WHEN THE TREE CAUGHT FIRE
WHEN THE TREE CAUGHT FIRE
When the tree caught fire
All the birds flew away
It was but natural that
They had to fly away
But one sparrow
While about to move, turned back
She nurtured a thought in her mind
She felt as if leaves of the tree are
Its thousand eyes
Looking at flying birds.
Nearby was a pond
Filling water from pond, in her beak
The sparrow started sprinkling the water
On that burning tree
A traveller passed by
The sparrow narrated to him
Fire of the tree will not be extinguished
By my beak-ful of water
Still, I think
Whenever, history of the forest will be written
My name will be mentioned as one
Who put efforts to put off fire
And upcoming generations of these trees will say
When we catch fire
Most of scared birds fly away
But some return to us.
After listening to the sparrow
The traveller, too, started
Sprinkling water on the tree
One after another
More and more travellers
Reached the spot
And thousands of birds too returned
Holding water in their beaks
It is known that fire of
Burning tree extinguished
During some next season
From the burnt trunk of the tree
Tender green leaves sprouted
As if green words scribbled on
Some black page.
That tree had become symbolic of hope
Like a lyric of gratitude and faith.
My mother had narrated me this episode
And told
Never deem yourself as weak
Never deem yourself as alone
If ever, a tree catches fire
Fly once
But return
Holding water in your beak
Recalling that sparrow.
POEM ORIGINALLY COMPOSED IN PUNJABI BY LITERARY ICON, PADAM SHRI SURJIT PATR JI
TRANSLATED BY ME INTO ENGLISH AS A DEDICATION TO HIS FOND MEMORY.
MY HEARTIEST WISH IS THAT THIS MOTIVATIONAL POEM, WITH INNATE DEPTH OF
THOUGHT REACHES ON GLOBAL LEVEL, TRANSCENDING
GEOGRAPHICAL BOUNDARIES.
RAJNI CHHABRA
MULTI-LINGUAL POETESS AND TRANSLATOR
Excellent translation of a poem by a great poet.
ReplyDeleteHearty thanks to you sharing me long cherished Punjabi Poem of Surjit Patr Ji and for liking my translation
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ReplyDeleteTo me the trees metaphor to life and the sparrows journey to understand it
Hearty thanks for sharing your metaphorical comment
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