DAUGHTER IN MUMBAI: A FEW IDEOGRAPHS : RAJASTHANI POEMS : ATUL KANAK : ENGLISH TRANSVERSION BY RAJNI CHHABRA
ATUL KANAK
DAUGHTER IN MUMBAI: A FEW IDEOGRAPHS
1.
I had trained her
For swimming into river
On a fateful day
She moved to
City of sea
Perhaps, she intended
To comprehend
What exhilaration river derives
From mingling in sea?
2.
Kandivali, Beachcandy, Bandra, Andheri, Dadar
These might be only names of localities for people
But for me, these hold significance like pilgrims, since the day
My daughter has reached Mumbai to settle over-there
And frequently moves in these localities
I beseech well-being of my daughter
From these only
Just as, masses ask for any boon
With bowed head in pilgrims.
3.
First of all, she goes to station by rickshaw
Then catches any local train from station
And reaches the place
That is nearby to her office
And then moving hurriedly , marks her presence.
My sparrow used to sleep till late
Even after sunrise
Covering her face with sheet of dreams
How has she become so mature that
Prior to sunrise, wakes up
To cherish her life?
4.
I feel concerned for my daughter
I am settled near Chambal river
And she, in the remote city of sea
How will she be managing everything
Coming/ going/ staying and smiling?
She was very fond of singing
Will she be able to manage
A few moments for humming
In her hectic schedule?
Not long ago
I had trained her to walk
Holding my hand
And now, running
She has learnt to board
Packed local trains
Is she my daughter
Or result of accumulated virtues
Of my previous lives
I intended to hold her
Cupped in my hands
Presently, she is flowing
To wash sins of the world.
ReplyDeletePosting comment on behalf of poet Jud Bowness from Boston
His love is that what makes a father
His trust is what makes him a dad
His love is what strength to her he provides
Setting her free into life is His greatest fear
JUD BOWNESS
Thanks, Dear Poet for this unique comment
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ReplyDeleteHeartfelt deep appreciation
Achala Nagpal
Hearty thanks
ReplyDeleteHeart touching reality on change in life style of a girl married in big urban City like. Mumbai compared to her habits and attitudes imparted by cultured parents in back home in some rural areas
ReplyDeleteYeah, I agree with you , Mallik Ji, there is an utter contrast in life style of rural , urban and metro , but our new generation adjusts very well in new life situations
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